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FANG

Hehehe kitty

I fucking love this, the shading and coloring is so lovely and the art style is adorable, if you make like Etsy stuff or ever do I highly ask you make this into a shirt or something.

I've always really liked how you use shapes and motifs in your character designs, I find it really charming. And I feel the first bit, I've gotten so bad at posting and overall organizing my NG that I've mildly given up posting here because it's overwhelming to try and post stuff here after not doing it in a WHILE, plus I don't have an actual computer that isn't half broken so making thumbnails look right is always a hassle since you can't crop as well on NG using an iPad on chrome.

I really like the way you shaded Zoes body specifically.
I'm also a sucker for purple and green shading so you get bonus points

I really like how much detail you put into this character's legs. Not just because the way you draw said legs is great, but also because the lankiness and length of them actually add to her design imo. With the lil ribbon in her hair she looks like she has a little jack rabbit motif to her, it's cute.

Adorable lol

Love it

beautiful, truly.

I think the animated pixel art comic over all is amazing, like honestly. This is gonna be badly worded cause I'm tired but lemme start with the art part of the lil comic first: I love the whole look of the art, it's simple and goofy, as well as surreal with your persona, it's very funny on how his mannerisms make his body contort, and the visual gags with both that and stuff like how "art" and "music" as well as "accounting bills" are blocks of cheese with holes/bites taken out of them, as well as the last one being untouched unlike the other ones. the art itself has the look of a mix of things, like 2000s/early 2010s educational flash games and old pixel webcomics, ones kinda like homestuck, it also reminds me of just old webcomics in general from that time for some reason. The lil animations are very very charming and really add to the humorous but self critical theme of the whole thing. I think the details, patterns and texture of the background are all very nice. Some of the objects are more detailed and more realistic than others, which I know some would say that's a bad thing but I think it's charming and honestly fits with the goofiness of the art. Now on to the monologue, I think it's great. wordy sure, but isn't a monologue a look into an individuals thoughts? some people are wordier than others (I would know lol). that leads to me to my next point, the text is full of personality and says a lot about the person whos thinking it, even in tone. Feels like a posh introverted person who jabs at themselves in a gentleman's kind of way, it's also very philosophical with every day dread and one's hopes and dreams, as well as insecurities and doubt. the flavor text is flavorful is what I'm saying here.
Now that that's outta the way, I'd like to say I had no idea you had dysgraphia, I just thought it you liked scrabbling words here and there for the fun of it. I personally am slow and have always had a thing where sometimes I accidently write gibberish cause I malfunctioned mid sentence and such, so I personally hate writing too. especially writing words, I have horrible hand writing, and when I was younger it used to hurt my hand a lot, drawings actually helped me with that a bit though. Anyway, I like those doodles, very simple and pretty clean and fluent stroke wise, all things considered. They have a surreal goofy feel to them, It's kinda nostalgic to me to be honest with you. they all remind me of old shows I enjoyed of varying art styles. when I saw the 7th one, while a bunch is going on, the lil screaming dog creature head makes me think of two things:
Wile E. Coyote
and my dads old college art.
anywho, I've said a bunch and I don't wanna make this just become me rambling, but after reading a lot, I thought it was right to write a bunch in response.
This is great, keep making shit buddy. You may not like it but others definitely will.

PS. don't be so damn hard on yourself!
- a hypocrite

Hello, I'm Mari. Working on trying to get my foot in the door.
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